Poem+3D

Ocean View

I live in Ocean View, a little neighborhood with about 250 people.

There are two grocery stores but the closest store is called K.C.M. and it is in the town center where everyone hangs out and eats the one food we all love, shave ice as sweet as a mothers love and as sour as a cold lemon in summer

In Ocean View there is only one tree and the tree is a small lava Ohia.

The Ocean View sport is doge ball and riding skateboards.

Now it is time to talk about me. In my extra time I like to play with my friends playing anything we want to do.

My favorite candy as a younger child was always Sour Skittles.

My favorite book has always been the book Eragon.

The saying that I always say is how about no.

And the show I watch most after school is SpongeBob SquarePants

-- Brandon Dancer

What makes this piece worth reading is that you can learn a lot about me with this.

A Struggle

A movement in the sand in the cold night.

A pop and a crack then a shuffle of sand from underneath.

Then appears A crowd of baby turtles struggling to dig to the surface.

A race to the ocean is set between the young turtles.

The sound of turtle flippers hitting the ground alerts predators along the beach.

In a matter of minutes 100 now diminishes to 95.

They press on with the race with their numbers slowly being depleted.

They reach the ocean and find out swimming is as hard as flopping in sand.

Relief washes over them in a cool sensation as they start their life.

---Reyn Watanabe What makes this poem worth reading is it has the start of life. I thought turtles were cute intelligent creatures.

Attention

I can hear people talking. I can see animals walking and getting attention from all the people who want to pet them.

So then we let them pet the pair of rabbits that they eat nothing else but carrots, where they live in a zoo that welcomes me and you. So come and see and look for me feeding the animals and lots to meet.

--Caleb Lewis

I picked this title because it talks about the animals getting attention from all the people at the petting zoo.

The High Way

I am an artist that discovers colorful ideas who creates nothing into something. Someone that strives for the better a person that revives the old.

I am not the artist who shatters dreams who despises others who is a follower who pities his own weaknesses.

I am an artist the one that commands fantasies who hungers for knowledge and wisdom. Graceful as the vivid winds calm as the spellbinding seas an idealist that speaks his mind.

There is no turning back no backing down no giving up just keep moving forward move towards the light until I emerge victorious.

--Dallas Tada--

My favorite image that I can see in this poem is when I talk about how I will not back down and keep moving forward because all artists have things that they need to work on. I can visualize myself improving and moving forward to become a great artist. I have titled this poem, “The High Way,” because whatever you are good at, you can still strive and be better. If you want to get better, choose “The High Way” and push yourself. You may have go out of your comfort zones to achieve your goals and come closer to the top. It may be hard, but it wouldn’t be for nothing.